How Does the characters world compare to the world you live in now? How can you describe what the character is feeling?
One of my comparison is I go to hunted house and when I don't get home at the time my parents say I got grounded and in the book Ryan and Sarah go to the dredge and get home lat and now Ryan is grounded.
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ReplyDeleteAndrew, I really enjoy the comment that you made about your comparison between what happens when you get grounded and the what happens with the characters in your book. I wish that you had shown support to defend your thinking.
ReplyDeleteGrade: 3 PP- You showed a limited understanding of the assignment and expectations as well as some awareness of your choices in your work. The assignment showed some imagination but the details and development need work.