In your book, what are some of the ways that your character expresses themselves through their emotions? How do they show love? Anger? Hate? Why is this important to you as a reader?
my author uses emotion with figurative language like the wolves hunted deer, coursed through them,in the winter,like sharks hitting schools of fish.it mack the reader understand what the author comparing. the reader can pitcher it in there head.
Andrew,
ReplyDeleteThis is such a good try. If you had added quotation marks around what you had pulled from your book, this would have helped me as a reader understand what you were trying to say. Also, what book was this from? How is the language that the author is using helping you see it in your head? Why is he doing that?
Grade: 3-4 PP- You showed a limited understanding of the assignment and expectations as well as some awareness of your choices in your work. The assignment showed some imagination but the details and development need work.